Hi Harlem, This is great. I love the pictures and the way you made your boat. Next time, instead of having rainbow writing, you could make it all one colour because some parts are hard to read. Other than that this post is AMAZING! - Atawhai
Hi Harlem Molly here, I agree with Atawhai next time you could try and keep the writing all the same colour. Overall I love this post and your Waka looks amazing! It is funny how you said that your boat was the best and did not sink! From Molly
Kia Ora Harlem! I thought that your boat was awesome from the design to the part on your google drawing that said it didn't sink! I loved the layout of your google drawing and the pictures were really good to look at to see yours and a real waka. One thing that you could change is that the bit of writing that is a maroon colour was a little bit hard to read but other than that your post was great. Great job! Emma
Hi Harlem,
ReplyDeleteThis is great. I love the pictures and the way you made your boat. Next time, instead of having rainbow writing, you could make it all one colour because some parts are hard to read. Other than that this post is AMAZING!
- Atawhai
Hi Harlem Molly here, I agree with Atawhai next time you could try and keep the writing all the same colour. Overall I love this post and your Waka looks amazing! It is funny how you said that your boat was the best and did not sink!
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Kia Ora Harlem! I thought that your boat was awesome from the design to the part on your google drawing that said it didn't sink! I loved the layout of your google drawing and the pictures were really good to look at to see yours and a real waka. One thing that you could change is that the bit of writing that is a maroon colour was a little bit hard to read but other than that your post was great. Great job! Emma
ReplyDeleteHi Emma thanks for your comment next time I won't change the colour of the words
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